negative critique

Uno) In the first two pictures it looks as if it was winded incorrectly and a struggle to remove, the first two pictures aapearwrinkled and under exposed but other.

Twono) i wish to critique numbers 5 &4.
5) kevin takes up the entire frame and you can see how focused he is (or appears to be, i don't like these negatives because it is hard for me to make them out)

4) in this photo you can see the joy in her face

the story

In this image we see a story pertrayed, these women are examining a car and leave everything else to the imagination of the viewer.

*ahem* this picture we see all the action and horse play in the background that seems to have no affect on the girl jkjklolomgbbq

The Camera

A pinhole camera is a camera without a glass lens. in an SLR camera you are given different shutter speed options but with a pinhole camera you operate the shutter manually.