Thursday, September 27, 2007

negative critique

Uno) In the first two pictures it looks as if it was winded incorrectly and a struggle to remove, the first two pictures aapearwrinkled and under exposed but other.

Twono) i wish to critique numbers 5 &4.
5) kevin takes up the entire frame and you can see how focused he is (or appears to be, i don't like these negatives because it is hard for me to make them out)

4) in this photo you can see the joy in her face

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